I think what you posted made a ton of sense. However, what about this? suppose you added a little content? I ain't saying your information is not good., but suppose you added something that grabbed people's attention? I mean %BLOG_TITLE% is a little vanilla. You ought to peek at Yahoo's home page and note how they write news headlines to grab people interested. You might add a related video or a related picture or two to get readers interested about what you've got to say. Just my opinion, it could bring your blog a little bit more interesting.
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