I think what you typed made a bunch of sense. But, what about this? what if you wrote a catchier post title? I ain't saying your information is not good., however what if you added a title that makes people desire more? I mean %BLOG_TITLE% is a little boring. You might look at Yahoo's front page and note how they create article titles to get viewers to click. You might add a video or a picture or two to grab readers excited about what you've written. In my opinion, it might bring your blog a little bit more interesting.